Case 6 · Writing range and voice
Sample news: staff feedback moves from paper to a digital form.
From 1 March, staff feedback goes digital. We expect to act on concerns in a week, not a month. No budget change.
Giving feedback just got easier. Use your phone, it takes five minutes, and each quarter you'll see what changed.
The organisation today launched a digital feedback system for field staff, aiming to cut response time from a month to a week.
Something to tell us? Say it by phone or in person, in your own language. We will listen and tell you what we did.
Voice attributes, tone by audience and before-and-after edits.